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Pope Francis
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it's about the current Pope, one of the most influential people in the world. The article should eventually be a featured one, if possible. I have made a lot of work with it, and proposed for GAN, that pointed many overlooked details about the references. I have fixed them, but I would like help to notice any other potential problems before nominating it again.

Thanks, Cambalachero (talk) 13:44, 11 June 2015 (UTC)

Comments from starship.paint


 * Hi . I'm not an expert on this topic, but I think his second encyclical Laudato si is significant and I would like to see more written about it in this article. More could be written about his first encyclical, Lumen fidei and his exhortation Evangelii gaudium too. starship.paint  ~ ¡ Olé ! ' 12:24, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Separately, Francis started the Pontifical Commission for the Protection of Minors but I could not find it while using CTRL-F in the article. Is there information about Francis' response to the Catholic Church sexual abuse cases? starship.paint  ~ ¡ Olé !  12:46, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 * I trimmed some stuff in the Nonbelievers section. I think you should definitely trim the paragraph on Hertzberg. starship.paint  ~ ¡ Olé !  13:06, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Additionally,, his ancestry needs references. starship.paint  ~ ¡ Olé !  03:12, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Bump - ? starship.paint ~  KO   07:28, 19 July 2015 (UTC)