Wikipedia:Peer review/Press Gang/archive1

Press Gang
Hi all. I've practically written all of this in its current state and would like to submit it for GA. I'd appreciate your suggestions for what could improve the article (including beyond GA). I don't always find vague comments like "some phrases are poorly constructed" helpful... if you have copyediting skills I'd find it much more helpful if you could correct such errors. The JPS talk to me  15:17, 7 January 2007 (UTC)


 * I notice two of the three images don't have fair use rationales. Make sure to add those.  ShadowHalo 13:27, 19 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Bloody hell, very surprised at myself for missing those! Thanks for pointing it out -- now corrected. The JPS talk to me  15:37, 19 January 2007 (UTC)