Wikipedia:Peer review/Primate/archive2

Primate
Restarting this peer review. Old review has been archived. I'm still looking for general coments, though perhaps I'll work towards FAC. - UtherSRG (talk) 07:51, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Here are some points:
 * A distribution map of non-human primates would be nice.
 * Comment on what kinds of habitats they live in and how loss of that habitat affects their conservation status.
 * Web references in Legal status section should probably be footnotes.
 * I'm of a divided mind whether the text focuses too much on "early" primates.
 * Someone should probably go through the article and add cite needed to suggest places where references published in print might be helpful.
 * Hope this helps. - User:Samsara (talk • contribs) 09:14, 11 March 2006 (UTC) Minor edits by UtherSRG (talk)


 * Certinly does! :)
 * I'll see what aid I can enlist to make some maps. I love what Pcb21 did with the cetacean articles.
 * Noted. I'll work on this, although it will take some time. Lots of habitats.....
 * I'll catch this tomorrow.
 * I'm mostly interested in taxonomic relationships, so this POV comes across a bit. I'll see what I can do to balance by adding other parts so that I don't have to remove. *grins*
 * I'll catch this tomorrow, too.
 * Thanks! - UtherSRG (talk) 09:24, 11 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Ok, I've done 3 and 5 for the most part. I think I should do something with the hybridization section, too. I'm looking to the other language 'pedias to see what information I can transwiki to improve this article. I think perhaps a section with more detail on some of the larger groupings would be helpful. - UtherSRG (talk) 17:16, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

Diet
Could somebody put in something about diet here? Maybe this is too broad a page for that topic, but can something sensible be said about the general range of diets in (non-human) primates? Some are very highly specialized, some not, and I think it would be interesting to have a very brief overview and perhaps some references (and a bit more on some species specific pages). Abu Amaal 23:01, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Some are herbivores, some are more specifically foliovores and fugivores. Some are omnivores. I'm not sure if any are strictly carnivores. I'll work on adding some information. - UtherSRG (talk) 23:14, 11 March 2006 (UTC)