Wikipedia:Peer review/Princess Peach/archive2

Princess Peach

 * Archived peer review

Acheived GA status a few months ago, and I'm hoping to maybe elevate to FA status in the future. Cheers, H ig hway Rainbow Sneakers 20:33, 30 June 2006 (UTC)


 * If you're going for featured status, you have got to find better sources. The nintendo instruction booklet and the nintendo.com refs are probably okay, but PeachParadise.com is a personal website, and the Nintendoland.com article is just pathetic.  To quote from the lead paragraph: "...in Super Mario Brother 2 she proved that she could take care of her problems herself and was if you ask me, the best character of choose.  In Super Marsio RPG she joins Mario and the other in their fight against the mysterious Smithys and ..." and beyond the grammar and spelling, actually contains false info (see "Quote #1 at the bottom"; it was not supposed to be Peach saying "our Princess is in another castle").  And Gamefaqs can be submitted by anyone, so they aren't reliable either (also, you can't link to them, which is annoying).  I know that online resources are limited, so I don't envy you trying to fix this.  I'm sure that Nintendo Power issues would contain some good references, though, but they might be kind of hard to dig up.  An extensive library would have them, but I bet a lot of libraries wouldn't have subscriptions...  Mango juice talk 00:17, 1 July 2006 (UTC)
 * I like in the UK. ¬_¬ H ig hway Rainbow Sneakers 00:27, 1 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Andy t 01:10, 1 July 2006 (UTC)
 * I feel the need to point out 14 uses of the word "also." Nifboy 05:16, 1 July 2006 (UTC)