Wikipedia:Peer review/Pro-ana/archive1

Pro-ana
I believe this article is a good NPOV one and it like it promoted to FAC status. PLease review. ~ Chris  (e)  09:57, 31 May 2006 (UTC)
 * In the lede sentence, describe "Pro-ana" as a social movement promoting a view of anorexia nervosa as a lifestyle choice rather than a disorder. The Pro-ana movement was most visible on the Internet between 2001 and 2003 and has subsequently faded in popularity... Kaisershatner 14:17, 31 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Done. ~ Chris  (e)  00:57, 1 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Take a look at User:AndyZ/Suggestions for suggestions; specifically:


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


 * Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, years, decades, and centuries without full dates generally should not be linked. For example, January 2006  should not be linked, instead change it to January 2006. Also, please note WP:BTW and WP:CONTEXT, which state that years with full dates should be linked. For example, February 28, 2006,  should be come February 28, 2006. 


 * There are several paragraphs that are too short, which sometimes disrupts the flow of the article. These should either be expanded or merged.


 * The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.


 * Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like and  may be useful here.


 * Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example,  ==The Biography==  would be changed to  ==Biography== .


 * This article has little/no images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under WP:IUP and WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.


 * This article may be a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
 * Thanks, Andy t 20:58, 1 June 2006 (UTC)


 * In response to Andy's point about dates: This task is easier with the aid of a 'dates' tab in edit mode. Simply copy the entire contents of User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work. You will also get a 'units' tab. Hope that helps. bobblewik 18:05, 2 June 2006 (UTC)