Wikipedia:Peer review/Proteus (video game)/archive2

Proteus (video game)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review as I would like to know the areas which need changing or improving in order to reach Featured Article status. I think the main issue will be the writing but I wouldn't be surprised if I had missed other things as I don't know the Manual of Style that well.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, Samwalton9 (talk) 01:29, 2 January 2014 (UTC)