Wikipedia:Peer review/Province of Bolzano-Bozen/archive1

Province of Bolzano-Bozen
This is a departure to what I usually do on Wikipedia. Because of that, I need help on this one to make it through the FAC process. It's an Italian province, so those who are good on Italian subjects or that can read Italian, I ask for your help on any expantion. Zscout370 (Sound Off) 04:09, 18 August 2005 (UTC) =Nichalp  «Talk»=  10:05, August 23, 2005 (UTC)
 * a) lacks photos. b) should cover mountaineering, skiing and walking, at least briefly. c) geology would be good and interesting d) statistics on the economy e) food f) natural disasters / floods / landslides g) disappearance of glaciers and retreat of the marmolada since the 1950s and before.  h) some very short paragraphs could better be combined i) some language is a bit strange / informal "prepared achieve their ends by hook or by crook" j) lack of coverage of transport systems. ;  Has definite potential. Area is great; should be a great article. Mozzerati 22:14, August 22, 2005 (UTC)
 * I will try to fix all of those as soon as I can. If you wish to help out, join in. Zscout370 (Sound Off) 22:17, 22 August 2005 (UTC)
 * I've read about this place in my newspaper recently. 1) History section is too long. Summarise, remove subheadings.
 * There's just a solitary paragraph on the government. The first para is more of a history. Explain the power sharing between the autonomous govt and Italian govt. Police etc. can be included.
 * Economy is short; expand
 * Culture, education, sports, transport, geology seem to be absent
 * I forked the History article, so I can condense the history. I will check up on those too. Zscout370 (Sound Off) 13:52, 23 August 2005 (UTC)