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Pune Cantonment
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this is my first major article creation and I've worked pretty hard on it...i want help in geography, transport and politics and governance.... Thanks, Nirvanareborn(TeenSpirit) 15:17, 9 January 2010 (UTC)

Brianboulton comments: not a review, but a few comments on images.
 * Too many for a short article. You have image location problems anyway, due to the enormous infobox. Some of your left-aligned images could easily go, for example the signboard, and perhaps one or other of the statue or the war memorial.
 * The images are generally too tiny.
 * Your image placement at present squeezes all the text between images and infobox
 * The answer, I believe, is to place all images except those in the infobox into a gallery at the end of the article. This would solve the squeeze problem and would enable you to display the photographs at a larger size. See WP:GALLERY
 * You will need to write alt text for all the images that you retain. See WP:ALT

By the way, if this is your first article it's not a bad job (I'm glad you can't see mine) Brianboulton (talk) 00:27, 14 January 2010 (UTC)
 * ✅ thanks a lot. i've added the alt text. increased image size a bit too. but all city articles i've seen rarely seem to have any galleries. the only problem i have with this article is Pune cantonment is identified as a part of Pune so it is pretty difficult to get vital statistics about the population.thnx Newayz.Nirvanareborn(Teen Spirit) 08:09, 14 January 2010 (UTC)