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Purnell Model for Cultural Competence
I've listed this article for peer review because this is the first article I have published to Wikipedia and would like some feedback to improve the overall quality. Some areas that I would like to be reviewed on (especially in terms of “The Purnell Model” section) include: the overall style and layout, the standard of the prose, clarity of writing, and if there are any issues in terms of the manual of style that I have been oblivious to. Overall I want to ensure that others can understand the article, so any comments even general ones would be much appreciated.

Thanks, Aimee.ball (talk) 11:55, 19 October 2018 (UTC)