Wikipedia:Peer review/Queen (band)/archive2

Queen (band)
Former Good Article. What needs to be done to bring the article back to GA status?— miketm - Queen WikiProject - 07:25, 22 February 2007 (UTC)

Remove all but the most necessary pictures of the albums. Then start making fuller paragraphs. WikiNew 10:44, 23 February 2007 (UTC)

In general, it needs more citations, especially inline citations about specific things. (Platinums, numbers, quotes, etc.) You seem to be using cite web - that's good, but the template needs to be filled out as much as you can - authors, for example, and publishers. The online citations all need a 'last accessed' date, in case they ever 404 on us, then we can use the Internet Archive. The testimonials from other musicians - couldn't that be said to be part of Queen's influence? I'd suggest you move the quotes into that section. The tone sometimes reads a bit unencyclopaedic - the League of Copyeditors may be able to help you there. Hope this helps. -Malkinann 22:15, 23 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 22:39, 26 February 2007 (UTC)