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RMS Titanic
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because…it is a former FA and one of the most read articles on Wikipedia. It has undergone many edits since last peer review and could need a new review. Last review version: 9 November 2011.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, Soerfm (talk) 19:34, 7 February 2013 (UTC)

Comments. Quick comment:
 * "he faced social ostracism that followed him for the rest of his life and beyond.": The thought is fine, but "ostracism" is the wrong word if we're talking about how he was regarded when he was dead. - Dank (push to talk) 18:59, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
 * The sentence has had two former versions (the present version is from 17 July 2012):
 * 4 March 2012: Some of the male survivors, notably the White Star Line's chairman, J. Bruce Ismay, were criticised for perceived cowardice for leaving the ship while women and children were still on board, and faced ostracism and social isolation.
 * 6 March 2012: Some of the male survivors, notably the White Star Line's chairman, J. Bruce Ismay, were accused of cowardice for leaving the ship while women and children were still on board, and they faced social ostracism.
 * Is any of these better? ~ Soerfm (talk) 22:20, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
 * I did something a little closer to what we had; see if that works for you. - Dank (push to talk) 23:35, 12 February 2013 (UTC)