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Raiden (Metal Gear)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've started editing this article some months ago considering the amount of sources I could find to expand the reception and creation sections. However, I have doubts about what does this article require before a copyedit and GA review, since it's still a C-Class. My main doubts are the organization and length from the sections.

Thanks, Tintor2 (talk) 23:12, 16 February 2012 (UTC)

Comments some quick things... The Rambling Man (talk) 20:04, 8 March 2012 (UTC)
 * "video game character" is a dab link.
 * The infobox image needs specific fair use justification for inclusion in this article.
 * The infobox image caption is an incomplete sentence so no need for a full stop.
 * Infobox, hyphens in the "affiliations" should be en-dashes.
 * I'd be happy for you to include "series" in the first wikilink of Metal Gear.
 * "came up with the idea of" just seems a little loose prose to me, not professional.
 * "white haired" should be hyphenated.
 * "sneaking suit" - this isn't common at all. What is this?
 * "which make him hard " makes?
 * LittleBigPlanet appears to be just one word.
 * Doctor Watson -> Dr. Watson.


 * Thanks. Made the changes.Tintor2 (talk) 20:58, 8 March 2012 (UTC)