Wikipedia:Peer review/Ralph Milne/archive1

Ralph Milne
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like an opinion on how it currently fares to Wiki standards, and any advice on how to improve it.

Thanks, ShugSty (talk) 07:39, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

- Article reads a little emotionally to me. One eg: third paragraph 'sadly'. Not factual, unbiased. Good read though! Good luck improving the article.

Yeah, I've rephrased that sentence now. Thanks. ShugSty (talk) 10:38, 1 September 2013 (UTC)