Wikipedia:Peer review/Rapping/archive1

Rapping
I am asking for Peer Review on this article because I have poured a lot of work into this, along with many others such as Modulatum and FuriousFreddy into making it accurate, organized, grammatical, and encyclopedic. Please keep in mind that this article is about rapping, not hip hop music or specific rappers. Thank you all so much for helping in the development of this article. --Urthogie 00:51, 18 December 2005 (UTC)
 * Interesting article. Needs more expansion in terms of content though, if you're considering it for FAC. :) - Mailer Diablo 15:22, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
 * Yeah, this isn't even close, format-wise. Merge or expand the stub-sections, and improve the article's aesthetics and layout (i.e. unfloat the table; once you merge the unnecessary oversectioning, it shouldn't be overlong enough that floating is necessary anyway). -Silence 16:13, 20 December 2005 (UTC)


 * im not so sure about the fact that hip-hop rap's origins came from africa — Preceding unsigned comment added by 151.200.143.17 (talk) 02:40, 18 March 2006 (UTC)