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Ray Charles
This person is very influencial and looking for comments on how to make this better and what will be required to get it up to featured article status. --Simonkoldyk 01:08, 26 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 16:49, 26 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Quite short with stubby paragraphs. There's nothing more can be said on this man? I wouldn't be shocked if this much can be written on him. - Tutmosis  22:26, 26 November 2006 (UTC)


 * I'm ditto-ing Tutmosis here. You have the exact opposite problem that the Dresden article has. I really can't do a nice copyediting over your arctice until its the appropriate length. When it is, I'd be honored to check the grammar for an article of such a wonderful man. Evan(Salad dressing is the milk of the infidel!) 22:43, 26 November 2006 (UTC)


 * I don't understand the relevance of having a section listing the names of his children - that's very trivial, so get rid of it. Unless you're considering doing a section on family life? LuciferMorgan 03:19, 2 December 2006 (UTC)