Wikipedia:Peer review/Ray of Light/archive1

Ray of Light
I have recently added to and expanded the article about this excellent Madonna album. I'm looking for any suggestions on how to improve the article, as I hope to nominate it for good article status in the near future. -- Underneath-it-All 02:17, 24 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.


 * Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006, but do not link January 2006.


 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
 * Numbers like those under "Cerifications and sales" should have citations.


 * This article can use copyediting to ensure that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work.
 * I can't seem to find the quote covered by the first footnote in the reference provided.
 * Thanks, AndyZ t 23:27, 24 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Thanks! I went through and have adressed many of the issues. I will go through the article again to look for other spelling and grammer errors, as well as weasel words. -- Underneath-it-All 02:52, 25 May 2006 (UTC)