Wikipedia:Peer review/Real Madrid Baloncesto/archive1

Real Madrid Baloncesto
I've listed this article for peer review because it's a solid B class article, and want to improve it.

Thanks, Saudi9999 06:53, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

Mattythewhite
First of all, I've re-rated it to start on all of the WikiProject's quality scales. It contains hardly any text, for starters.


 * Can the image be used on all of these different articles? The fair-use rationale doesn't even specify which article it shouldn't be used in.
 * The "Major trophies" section needs to includes endashes instead of slashes for seasons and needs more referencing.
 * The "Current squad 2007/08" section should be renamed to just "Current squad" - doesn't really need "2007/08" on the end. The section should give a date so we know how up to date it is. And the source needs to be placed as a reference.
 * The "Famous players" section seems a bit.. blank. Maybe it could give some former players, including a criteria for their addition?
 * The box should be removed from the "Notes and references" section, per WP:CITE.
 * The "External links" section needs cutting down per WP:EL.
 * Then I notice that's all of it. Where is the text? The only text is in the lead. Surely this club has a history!

Needs a lot of work, and the lack of text is why I have downgraded it. Mattythewhite 10:17, 7 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 19:03, 7 October 2007 (UTC)