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Redwood National and State Parks
It was commented that this article was one of the worst in Wikipedia a little over a month ago. Since then a complete rewrite has been performed and now I am looking for some assistance with copyediting and any enhancements that may be needed.--MONGO 02:22, 3 June 2006 (UTC)


 * I like what you have done and have given it a copyedit. There were a few places where I thought extra references would be helpful (ie it should be possible to know the number of actual earthquakes!) so I added citation requests. Overall a great job! InvictaHOG 04:39, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Yes, the number of quakes would be good...I've added a few references for you.--MONGO 05:04, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
 * A I made the comment about how terrible the article was a month ago,, I must say you have done an absolutely phenomenal job on it! Just fix those citation requests and get this baby in for a FA nomination! PDXblazers 04:45, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
 * It's all your Fault!:)...I meant to point this out, but help as you see fit...I actaully am waiting for someone to upload an image I still wish to add and I think, for some reason I need more details. It's still in progress.--MONGO 05:04, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Also, I'll work to eliminate the redlined links...they at least deserve stubs--MONGO 05:07, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
 * I did notice that you should check the copyright tags on the images. At least one is obsolete and either the tag needs to be fixed or the pic needs to be changed. PDXblazers 02:36, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
 * I replaced the image with a different one, thanks for noticing this.--MONGO 20:23, 6 June 2006 (UTC)