Wikipedia:Peer review/Rehab (Amy Winehouse song)/archive1

Rehab (Amy Winehouse song)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because over time, it has really started to come together. This was obviously one of the most lauded/controversial/famous tunes of last year, and it matters that this article is done well.

Thanks, Esprit15d • talk • contribs 14:12, 25 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments from
Firstly as a general rule the article needs to use British English, it currently seems to be US English (e.g. recognizes). Specific things to consider... That's it! The Rambling Man (talk) 14:15, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Expand the lead per WP:LEAD - at least two paragraphs for an article of this length.
 * Background final two paragraphs too short, either expand or merge.
 * "In November 2006, an early demonstration version lacking the horn section and originally played on Mark Ronson's East Village Radio show was released in the iTunes Store." needs citation.
 * "The band is dressed in gowns " "The band members are dressed in gowns..." sounds a bit better to me.
 * "On May 31," which year?
 * " jumped a massive " - POV.
 * Half of the Commercial section needs referencing.
 * UK R&B Singles Chart doesn't have a reference.
 * " have sprung up" - not particularly encyclopaedic.
 * "pop singer Justin Timberlake would the song's chorus " word missing here?
 * Fix the [citation needed] tag.
 * If you insist on keeping the succession boxes, at least merge them.
 * You have one dead link when I checked - use this to help.

Comments from

 * In favor of the prose, please put the charts and lists after the Notable appearances in the media section.
 * The alternate cover adds nothing to the article, and its non-free. Use them if they're extensively discussed in the article.
 * Please supply the copyright information of this image: Image:Amy Winehouse - Rehab.jpg, as well as Image:WinehouseRehab.ogg.

I was actually planning to revamp this article and pass to FAC, but I just stumbled on PR today and found this. I will help, instead. --Efe (talk) 10:58, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments from
Thank You. Indianescence (talk) 05:52, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Did not review the article completely, but the statistical data and the sales number are unsourced.
 * I know that the article is small, so the lead should not be very long. But i feel this is way too short. Something about the songs impact would be great.