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Rehab (Rihanna song)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for GA-Status but would appreciate any input on what in the article could prevent it from achieving GA-Status.

Thanks, Blizzard01 (talk) 12:29, 11 September 2010 (UTC)

I'm reviewing the article, and if I were the GAN reviewer I would comment:
 * Comments by Tb hotch Ta lk C.


 * Infobox
 * File:RihanHab.jpg need to be at most 300px.
 * B-side = Rehab (insrumental)


 * Lead
 * December 8, 2008 -> December 8, 2008,
 * "What Goes Around.../...Comes Around" (2007). -> Maybe the release date could be used after the first Good Girl Gone Bad.
 * it has reached eighteen on the Billboard Hot 100. -> Billboard Hot 100, and maybe "it reached" because it could re-enter, but it is not probably.
 * Rihanna performed "Rehab" at the 2008 American Music Awards as well as on The Last Girl on Earth Tour and the Good Girl Gone Bad Tour where she performed the song while wearing a revealing leather outfit. -> I would add some commas like "Rihanna performed "Rehab" at the 2008 American Music Awards, as well as on The Last Girl on Earth Tour and the Good Girl Gone Bad Tour, where she performed the song while wearing a revealing leather outfit.
 * I am currently editing from Opera, I'll fix these sections as soon as I have pc access.


 * Background
 * Rihanna and Justin Timberlake -> overlinked✅
 * At About.com, -> id.
 * 'id' meaning?
 * id. -> idem, the same, in this case overlinked. Tb hotch Ta lk C. 17:22, 13 September 2010 (UTC)


 * Composition
 * File:Rihanna Rehab.ogg.ogg should be reduced per WP:SAMPLE
 * Do you perhaps know where I can get hold of a reduced sample?
 * You may ask to another user if s/he could upload a new and reduced sample. Tb hotch Ta lk C. 17:23, 13 September 2010 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine -> Slant is not a printed magazine
 * Entertainment Weekly, About.com, Justin Timberlake, What Goes Around.../...Comes Around, Good Girl Gone Bad, PopMatters, Madonna (entertainer), Babyface (musician), Take a Bow (Madonna song), Timbaland, Metro Weekly -> overlinked


 * Chart performance
 * Billboard Hot 100 -> Billboard Hot 100
 * Ref 25 must be a Billboard link, it is the sixth highest debut of that week, so it exist.
 * on Billboard's Pop Songs chart[27], -> on Billboard's Pop Songs chart,[27]
 * "Rehab" debuted on the Canadian Hot 100 at number fifty-six and reached a peak of nineteen -> "Rehab" debuted on the Canadian Hot 100 at number fifty-six, and reached a peak of nineteen
 * "Rehab" debuted on the Canadian Hot 100 at number fifty-six -> source does not state it
 * on the issue dated November 17, 2008 -> on the issue dated November 17, 2008,
 * The song has peaked -> The song peaked
 * giving Rihanna her thirteenth -> Actually was her twelfth
 * the issue of October 27, 2008 and reached -> the issue of October 27, 2008, and reached
 * on January 11, 2009 -> on January 11, 2009,
 * after twelve weeks on the chart, shipping over 7,500 copies. ->
 * The song debuted on the UK Singles Chart at number fifty-one in November 2008. -> source does not state it.
 * aCharts should be avoided, only can be used when the information is not available on the official chart. Why you not try the Official website or chartstats?

top five hit there. [35] -> top five hit there.[35]
 * song has also debuted-> and it still debuting?
 * The song has also debuted on the Dutch Top 40 at number eighteen on the issue dated January 17, 2009.[36] -> Why the aCharts link is used when the Hung Medien or the official are availables?
 * It has peaked -> It peaked


 * Music video
 * Hoy File:Rehabmusicvideo.JPG pass WP:NFCC? Exist other better screenshots
 * "Rehab" with Justin Timberlake -> overlinked
 * outside of Los Angeles -> Los Angeles, Texas? or maybe Los Angeles, California?
 * It was directed by Anthony Mandler and preview -> It was directed by Anthony Mandler, and preview
 * "Take a Bow" and "Unfaithful". -> overlinked
 * including: "Disturbia", "Take a Bow" and "Unfaithful" -> source does not state it
 * Timberlake's girlfriend and American actress Jessica Biel was -> Timberlake's then-girlfriend, and American actress, Jessica Biel was
 * It begun impacting music television stations in the United States on November 10, 2008. -> source does not state it
 * music video won an award for 'Best Music Video' at the 2009 Urban Music Awards where Rihanna also won the award for 'Best Female Artist' -> music video won an award for "Best Music Video" at the 2009 Urban Music Awards, where Rihanna also won the award for "Best Female Artist"


 * Live performances
 * File:Rihannna good girl gone bad live.png -> Several issues: break the rules of fair use, especially number 8, also there is no summary of why it can be used on this article; the image is not discussed anywhere; the performing "Rehab" is no sourced.
 * On April 28, 2008 -> On April 28, 2008,
 * on November 23, 2008 -> " on November 23, 2008,
 * "Rehab" features as the twelveth track on Rihanna's setlist for her 2010 tour, Last Girl on Earth Tour. ->
 * She performed it on a therapist's couch adorned with metal casts of human heads and limbs ->


 * Purchasable releases
 * The table needs a fix


 * References
 * In general overlinked
 * Ref 3, 9, 16 work=Entertainemnt Weekly publisher=Time Inc
 * Ref 4, 5, 41, 46 work=Digital Spy publisher=Hachette Filipacchi Ltd
 * Ref 7, 51 |work=MTV News |publisher=MTV Networks or Viacom
 * Ref 8 |work=About.com |publisher=The New York Times Company
 * Ref 10 |work=IGN |publisher=News International
 * Ref 19 |work=The Village Voice |publisher=Village Voice Media
 * Ref 21 |work=The Boston Globe |publisher=The New York Times Company
 * Ref 22 |work=Yahoo! Music |publisher=Yahoo!
 * Ref 25 Billboard. Billboard.com. -> consistency -> |work=Billboard |publisher=Nielsen Business Media, Inc
 * Ref 24, 26, 27 and 28 the "for Rihanna" is not needed
 * Ref 32, 41 need accessdate
 * Ref 48 |work=Daily Mail |publisher=Daily Mail and General Trust
 * Ref 55 |work=Variety |publisher=Reed Business Information
 * Ref 56 |work=New York Times |publisher=The New York Times Company
 * Ref 57 |Work=Chicago Tribune |publisher=Tribune Company
 * Rev 59 |work=The Providence Journal |publisher=A.H. Belo Corporation
 * Ref 60 needs consistency (check ref 102)
 * Ref 61 needs consistency (check ref 62, 63)
 * Refs 90, 92 and 101 need consistency


 * General
 * some links need update
 * In general, the article needs commas in general, throughout it is like a "read n'run" article, I could not tell you exactly where but some of them are lacking.