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Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute
I've been helping with some cleanup on this article, and I think it should eventually pass the GA nom. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, Danski14 18:48, 21 January 2007 (UTC)

Trebor
Pretty good, but needs a bit of a tidy-up throughout. I haven't looked at the prose in any great detail either. Trebor 19:59, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Tidy up the references, use the appropriate cite template to get them automatically formatted with source, title, reference date and so on.
 * There are a number of external links embedded in the article, which is a bit messy. Link to the Wikipedia page, or put them in External Links (or don't link at all if they're not very relevant). ✅(except campus links to maps, and still could use a little tweaking)
 * As ridiculous as this arrangement sound - very POV. ✅
 * The first couple of sections are good, but it becomes listy and unreferenced later on (particularly Campus)✅(references added}
 * The title of the last section should probably be Notable alumni ✅

Thanks for the comments. I worked on the citations. I agree that campus is a little listy, but am unsure of what to do, if anything. Danski14 22:48, 21 January 2007 (UTC)


 * As the prose elaborates on the periods of expansion, the list at the start may be unnecessary. But I was mainly referring to the lack of citations for the whole of the Campus section. Trebor 22:50, 21 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Ok, I think I will add one or two more. Danski14 22:53, 21 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 21:39, 21 January 2007 (UTC)