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Rihanna 2006 Tour
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to promote Music of the Sun to Good Topic, but I doubt this article will be able to become GA. So according to the criteria, I am listing this for a Peer Review to solve any issues because nominating for Good Topic.

Thanks, Calvin  &bull; Watch  n'  Learn 22:38, 14 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Comments from Sp33dyphil
 * Is the The suitable/necessary as the starting word in this case?
 * "by Barbadian singer recording artist"
 * "album, Music of the Sun, and" missing comma.
 * "The tour supported her debut studio album, Music of the Sun and second studio album, A Girl Like Me.[1] The tour took place during the summer of 2006." --> "Taking place during the summer of 2006, the tour supported her debut studio album, Music of the Sun, and second studio album, A Girl Like Me.[1]"
 * I'd prefer it if all the "(select dates)"s are left in their natural size so as to aid vision-impaired readers. But, it's your call.
 * MOS calls for the inclusion of alt text.
 * Be consistent with your date format. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 08:57, 2 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 13:12, 3 February 2012 (UTC)