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Rise and Fall: Civilizations at War
Hello PR reviewers, and thank you for taking the time to review this article. I rewrote it based on Empires: Dawn of the Modern World, a FA written by Clyde Miller and Deckiller. I've asked them to help me out on this one too, since they are more experienced. I'm trying to get it to GA, then FA if possible, but I'd like some suggestions on how to improve it. I'd appreciate any comments or tips. Thanks again! · A ndonic O  Talk  22:49, 16 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 20:40, 19 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you, I'll look into that. · A ndonic O  Talk  21:12, 19 February 2007 (UTC)
 * I've left some suggestions on the talk page after my GA review. Nifboy 14:55, 23 February 2007 (UTC)