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Robert Coles (settler)
I've listed this article for peer review because i have expanded the article with more information and references. I am seeking some suggestions about how to bring it to the next grade.

Thanks, Diogenes99 (talk) 13:39, 28 August 2018 (UTC)

The article looks like it is well researched and in good shape. I suggest that you do a GAN after the peer review is done, to get this listed as a Good Article. I fixed a few style issues but here is another one: you should not have external links in the text of the article. They can be moved to an "External links" section if appropriate. In one place you have four cits in a row. Three is the usual maximum as per WP:CITEKILL; you should remove the least reliable one or move them closer to the information that they are citing. Some of the details, such as his children's marriages and the exact location of his land, are probably excessive detail and should be removed. Catrìona (talk) 03:29, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

These are all good suggestions and i have made the changes, except for one, which was to removed the spouses. Since the family continued the tradition of fighting for religious freedom, I though it relevant. Diogenes99 (talk) 03:17, 2 September 2018 (UTC)