Wikipedia:Peer review/Rockefeller Foundation/archive1

Rockefeller Foundation


I've just completed a major cleanup and edit of this page which had a dicey past of COI editors and other issues. I still need to run down a few citations but I think it's coming along. Would appreciate any suggestions and pointers. Andre🚐 15:30, 18 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Z1720
These comments are based on a quick scan of the article:


 * Citation needed templates need to be resolved.
 * There should probably be a citation at the end of every paragraph (except the lede)
 * "People affiliated with the foundation" needs a lot more citations.
 * Avoid short, one or two sentence paragraphs.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 04:17, 29 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks! Andre🚐 14:41, 29 September 2022 (UTC)