Wikipedia:Peer review/Roku/archive1

Roku
This peer review discussion has been closed. Just did a split on the article. Really need advice on clean up.

Thanks, Serialjoepsycho (talk) 20:37, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

Comments from Cas Liber

 * Too many sentences star with "On date x,..." -see my tweaks


 * I am not familiar with it and have no idea what it is at first read - it needs a description section of what it is before launching into the timeline.


 * Is there any review/feedback/criticism that can be added? Any models/upgrades that worked better or worse than expected?

Good luck...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:41, 3 April 2014 (UTC)