Wikipedia:Peer review/Ronald E. Neumann/archive1

Ronald E. Neumann
I've researched and written this article and I think it might be a good example of a current biography of a noteworthy person, but I am looking for peer review to help make it the best it can be. I am particularly pleased because recently the Ambassador visited the page and gave it good marks for accuracy. Is it possible for something like this to become a FA? What improvements would you suggest I make here? This page was previously listed on DYK. -- JRP 03:25, 15 August 2005 (UTC)

The article would need to be bulked out quite a bit to become a FAC, see Helen Gandy for a recent example of a reliatively minor polictial figure that reached featured status. For instance what did he do before he became a diplomat, there could also be more detail on his diplomatic postings and on the scandal that occured while he was in Bahrain in addition to his other posts. --nixie 12:57, 15 August 2005 (UTC)