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Rory O'Donnell, 1st Earl of Tyrconnell
Just revised and added to this article. Still have a ways to go; just looking for comments. Thank you. Fergananim 01:36, 23 January 2006 (UTC)

The bit about how his name should be pronounced doesn't need its own section - I'd use either a sentence in the intro or a footnote for this. I prefer it when years aren't wikified but don't think there's any policy on this. CTOAGN (talk) 15:42, 23 January 2006 (UTC)

I've had another look at the article and don't think it's ready for PR; it doesn't meet the "nearly FA standard" criterion at the top of the page. It could do with some sources for "...should be written and pronounced as Rury" and "...believed to..." (both times). At the moment it reads more like a story than an encyclopaedia article: phrases like "...treated so gingerly..." and "not believed to have had any issue" seem a bit weird to me, unless they're common phrases in Ireland in which case by all means keep them in. CTOAGN (talk) 15:59, 23 January 2006 (UTC)