Wikipedia:Peer review/Royal Grammar School Worcester/archive1

Royal Grammar School Worcester
Would welcome feedback on this page. I think that we have managed to create a reasonably well balanced and pretty stylish page, but would welcome the views of other users, and their suggestions. Wisden17 20:44, 10 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Lead is too short. AndyZ 21:50, 10 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Lead is too short.
 * "The Perrins Hall is arguably the finest building". Weasel terms. Atribute this opinion to someone notable, or failing that, better remove it from the article.
 * What about information on the school today? It would also be nice to include more info on the documents that state the school's origin. JoaoRicardotalk 21:17, 11 January 2006 (UTC)