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Rus' Khaganate
This article just achieved GA status. I am looking for any suggestions that can help improve style, readability, etc., in preparation for possibly posting it as an FAC. Briangotts (Talk) (Contrib) 17:26, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
 * I'm going to make major rewrites. Please have patience. -- Ghirla -трёп-  20:02, 15 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 23:22, 15 November 2006 (UTC)