Wikipedia:Peer review/Rust (video game)/archive1

Rust (video game)

 * Notified: Rhain1999, WikiProject Video games
 * Notified: Rhain1999, WikiProject Video games

This peer review discussion has been closed.

I've listed this article for peer review because I've been working on it a lot over the past few weeks and I'd like feedback and ideas for the article. I want to try to get it to GA standard, when the game is fully released. Thanks, Ana r chyte  05:05, 6 August 2015 (UTC)

You can copyedit the article again so as to make sure that the article is free from any grammatical error. One more reminder is that you should nominate the article after the game's release, or it will basically be an instant fail. Hope these comments help. AdrianGamer (talk) 12:16, 6 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for all the tips, I've left comments under some. Ana r chyte  06:59, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
 * I've rephrased some of the quotes, except the one under development as it would be better left alone. Is it better now? Ana r chyte  06:42, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
 * The one in the development section can be leave alone, but it does not really need to be mentioned twice in the article. AdrianGamer (talk) 08:59, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
 * I removed the pull quote, . Ana r chyte  11:45, 13 August 2015 (UTC)

This request looks premature, a quick google news search finds there's lots more to cover in this article. Such as penis size got lots of coverage, sales of 750,000 cheating should be discussed what about Mr Berry?--Vaypertrail (talk) 17:35, 31 August 2015 (UTC)
 * I agree that some sections need expansion. However, given that the game is still far from its official launch, you still have plenty of time to work on them. I suggest you to start another peer review after the game's launch. I expect things would change a lot by that time. (new details, official review etc.) AdrianGamer (talk) 14:44, 1 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Since the review request is older than one month, with no more activity. I am closing the review now. AdrianGamer (talk) 13:57, 17 September 2015 (UTC)