Wikipedia:Peer review/S.H.E/archive1

S.H.E
Many changes have been made to this article, including the adding of sources, as well as information on their musical style and influence. I know we're missing information on the Girls Dormitory section, so I would like to request to reviewers to temporarily ignore that section. I am looking for prose feedback, as well as feedback on what info seems inappropriate for a musical biography article. The prose itself is rather iffy, as it reads more like a list rather than "brilliant prose." Most of the sentences are probably awkwardly phrased, so I'd like to fix that as well.

I'm also looking to boost this to GA, if not FA. In the latter case, I'd like feedback on what this article lacks to get FA status. Thanks. Pandacomics 00:46, 23 March 2007 (UTC)