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This article recently was gutted by an editor whose IP Aderess is that of the subject company. It seems to have lost any neutrality and refrences removed. Feed back on improving this article would be appreciated. Thanks, Reviewer872 (talk) 23:35, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

Comment: Peer review is not appropriate at this point. WP:PR is "intended for high-quality articles that have already undergone extensive work, often as a way of preparing a featured article candidate". This article looks as though it needs to be reconsidered from scratch. At the moment it reads like a company blurb. I think that the fitst question that needs to be asked is what is the purpose of this article supposed to be? If it is to gain publicity for the company, then this is the wrong track entirely. Brianboulton (talk) 21:29, 14 August 2011 (UTC)