Wikipedia:Peer review/Sanja Matsuri/archive1

Sanja Matsuri
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I just completely overhauled the article taking it from a stub to hopefully a high quality article. I've been staring at it too long to get a constructive review from myself so I need some help!

Thanks! Torsodog (talk) 05:44, 8 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments from
Some ideas... Not much more to say, there's a chance for GA, but FA is a long way off right now... The Rambling Man (talk) 19:09, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
 * "(present day Tokyo)" - this is related to Edo, not the whole of the previous clause, so perhaps it needs clarification.
 * " Kanda Festival and Sanno Festival" - any wikilinks available...
 * References should use the cite web template and not be raw URLs.
 * I'd suggest expanding the history section and making it less "in-universe" - for a non-expert it's difficult to go with it all...
 * Schedule section should be prose really rather than a bland table.
 * Not clear about the relevance of the external links, check WP:EL to ensure that the links really comply.