Wikipedia:Peer review/Say You'll Be There/archive1

Say You'll Be There
Requesting peer review on this article. It's a 1996 song by the Spice Girls. It needs to be edited, revised, and improved by another editor. Pretty much open to any suggestions, comments, and what-have-you.

Thanks,

Frcm1988 06:02, 18 September 2007 (UTC)


 * You've done a great job at maintaining it, it looks great. I'd recommend extending the lead section a bit more, say another paragraph at the least to ensure that the lead summarises the whole article. I can also see a bit of inconsistency in terms of formatting references; the little  tags must be placed at the end of a period and after a comma or semi-colon. You might consider moving the ref tag to the end of the sentence when it's attached to a particular word, e.g. "[...] where it reached number one in Finland[3]and the top ten throughout.", move [3] to the end of the statement.  Sebi  [talk] 21:03, 20 September 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the suggestions. I'll try to work on that.

Frcm1988


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 01:01, 25 September 2007 (UTC)