Wikipedia:Peer review/Sega v. Accolade/archive1

Sega v. Accolade
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I've spent a lot of time working on it and, having not been active on Wikipedia in quite some time, I'd like to see if there's anything major I need to improve on before starting a GAN for it. Basically, I rewrote the whole thing from scratch today in about six hours, and before it was rewritten, three different WikiProjects had it classified as Start-class. I'm pretty sure it's a lot better than that now, but I'm not sure if I'm missing anything stylistically or in material, and I could use an extra set of eyes to help me see what I'm not seeing before trying to push it higher.

Thanks, Red Phoenix  build the future...remember the past... 21:38, 9 May 2013 (UTC)