Wikipedia:Peer review/Selected Ambient Works 85–92/archive1

Selected Ambient Works 85–92


I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it to GA status.

Thanks, Davest3r08 > : )  (talk) 13:37, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

 * Last paragraph of the "Music" section needs a citation ✅ Davest3r08 > : )  (talk) 11:39, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
 * "James also suggested that it represented a sigil." Needs a citation altogether, couldn't find any sources confirming this.  Davest3r08 > : )  (talk) 14:32, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
 * The reception sections uses the "X said Y" pattern a lot and also uses a lot of quotes. I suggest reading WP:RECEPTION and reworking this section.
 * "All tracks are written by Richard D. James" Needs a citation ✔️ Davest3r08 > : )  (talk) 14:32, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
 * The Personnel section is quite short. I suggest expanding this. ❌ Liner notes say that only James was involved with the writing and production of the album. Davest3r08 > : )  (talk) 16:25, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
 * What makes Lanner Chronicle a reliable source?  Davest3r08 > : )  (talk) 16:26, 20 March 2024 (UTC)

Those are my thoughts. Z1720 (talk) 19:29, 15 March 2024 (UTC)