Wikipedia:Peer review/Selena Live!/archive1

Selena Live!
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I've expanded it and would like it to be a GA article in the near future :)

Thanks, Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  01:33, 7 November 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for my bad punctuality. The article does not look bad, although are a few things you need to look out for before GAN:
 * WP Comments
 * What is "Latin type" certification? Is it necessary and how is it different from the normal RIAA certification, which is written as "(standard)" in this article?
 * The Spanish certification (Disco De Platino), their certification requirements are different from RIAA's standard certification. For example, a gold certification would be 500,000 copies in Spanish the requirements would only need to be 50,000 copies. Platinum is 1,000,000 in Spanish its 100,000 copies. :-)
 * Careful of words like "upon", which may be considered a bit too formal. Try "following the album's release".
 * "Live! had won two awards from the Billboard Latin Music Awards" - what year?
 * Too many sentences begin with "The album" and it makes the prose bad and repetitive. Try variations like Live!, The live album, The release, It, etc.
 * Same with "The song". Try variations like The track, The singles (if the song was released as such), The recording, It, etc.
 * "Live! incorporated three cumbia-influenced studio tracks" - you mean it no longer does? Use present tense instead to describe the album's content.
 * Be careful how you use the word "also" Most times, it is completely redundant and has no effect in the sentence's structure and meaning whatsoever. Example: "Another original song performed by Astudillo, '¿Porque le gusta bailar cumbia?', is also included in the track listing of Live! and was released on Como nadie."
 * Do you have a source to the Track listing?
 * I suggest chart tables be formatted according to WP:ACCESS.
 * FN 11: Publisher/label? Also, a catalog number (publisherid) and page numbers are recommended.
 * FN 17: Format this like I told you in the GAN.
 * FN 35: Try Template:Cite album-notes.
 * FN 36: There should be a period (full stop) at the end of that sentence.
 * I can't change it, I believe that's the way it is supposed to be.
 * Check FN 37. It may be dead. Don't forget to deal with all dead links before GAN. WP:Checklinks is a great tool. Click on the "external links" on the toolbox to the right.
 * All web sources need access dates. Check FN 37 for this.

Work still needed before taking this article to GAN. Hope my advice helps. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  21:25, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Hope I all the concerns you addressed. Best,  Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  22:17, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Note; the number found on Amazon is not a catalog number. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  23:03, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅ Sowwry :-) Jona yo! Selena 4 ever  00:22, 9 December 2011 (UTC)