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Selena videography
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to take the article to FLC

Thanks, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  19:50, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 18:37, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
 * No image for the infobox?
 * "Selena had released 22 music videos and 12 video/live albums during her career" no need for "had".
 * No need to link orchestra.
 * "which is a duet with" just "a duet with" is fine (you don't need "which is a").
 * "it featured Selena and a couple of people dancing" -> "featuring Selena and two people dancing..."
 * " dancing the cumbia dance in a beach house" -> "dancing to the cumbia in a beach house" and delink "beach house".
 * "dancing in the styles of hip hop." -> "hip-hop dancing."
 * Link Joshua Tree National Park and make the capitalisation correct.
 * You could mention in one sentence how/why Selena died.
 * ""Viviras Selena", which is a tribute song," don't need "which is".
 * "was only featured in two scenes" -> "was featured in only two scenes"
 * "During Selena's tenth death anniversary " -> "In 2005, ten years after Selena's death..."
 * Make the tables conform with MOS:DTT, i.e. focus on the accessibility. You aren't prohibited from using colours for pure visual appeal, but please use col and row scopes.
 * Song titles don't match reliable sources with their capitalisation.
 * Don't think you need a separate table for posthumous videos, merge the tables into one sortable table.
 * "Video/Live albums" as a title isn't good, at least decapitalise and make it "Video/live albums"...
 * No need for the bullet points in the certifications column.
 * Ensure all references comply with WP:DASH (i.e. en-dashes not spaced hyphens) and have publisher/publication dates wherever possible.