Wikipedia:Peer review/Sesame Street/archive4

Sesame Street

 * Peer review/Sesame Street/archive2
 * Peer review/Sesame Street/archive3

What's the article need now? I think I've addressed the concerns from the previous PRs. -- Zanimum 17:50, 12 June 2006 (UTC)


 * The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program. They may or may not be accurate for the article in question (due to possible errors/uniqueness of articles). If the following suggestions are completely incorrect about the article, please drop a note on my talk page.


 * Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked (Don't link September or Tuesday unless there is really good reason to). Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.


 * See below. --  Zanimum 18:55, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Per WP:WIAFA, Images should have concise captions.


 * While I agree, concise captions don't allow me to prove enough supporting information to claim fair use. Ideas? --  Zanimum 18:55, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a no-break space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18&amp;nbsp;mm.


 * I don't see any measurements. --  Zanimum 18:54, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example,  ==The Biography==  would be changed to  ==Biography== .


 * Would look to odd with just "Humans" as a category. --  Zanimum 18:54, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.


 * Done, painfully. --  Zanimum 18:52, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) maybe too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per WP:SS.


 * This is already a summarised version. --  Zanimum 18:52, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.


 * Fixed any that weren't cited. --  Zanimum 18:52, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * This article can use copyediting to ensure that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work.
 * You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions (and the javascript checklist; see the last paragraph in the lead) for further ideas.
 * Thanks, Andy t 22:26, 12 June 2006 (UTC)


 * As said above, this article needs attention to dates. This can be done quickly, simply copy the entire contents of User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work. This will give you a 'Dates' tab. Hope that helps. bobblewik 17:54, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * What exactly about dates? I'm not at a computer right now where I can modify my Monobook. The date links all seem fine. I don't link to any months or days of the week. --  Zanimum 19:21, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * There are unnecessary links to solitary years. If you update your monobook as described and press the 'Dates' tab, you will see the proposed edit. Feel free to try it and accept or reject the edit. bobblewik 18:01, 14 June 2006 (UTC)