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Shogi

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I'm not going for FA, but am looking for advice on getting this to GA. Yes, I know it requires thorough referencing, but what I'm really looking for is a basic outline of what else is needed, since I'm not familiar with the expectations of game articles. (I posted at GAN, and they suggested that I come here, since it would have been quick failed for the lack of inline refs.)

Thanks, kwami (talk) 22:12, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

--Redtigerxyz (talk) 12:50, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Discusses main aspects of the subject, fulfills that criterion of WP:GA?
 * Too many subsections in Section 1
 * Strategy and tactics - needs more inline references.
 * Lead is too short
 * Thanks! kwami (talk) 18:39, 26 October 2008 (UTC)