Wikipedia:Peer review/Shades of Deep Purple/archive1

Shades of Deep Purple
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I expanded the content and improved the references, but I need language advice for the tone and grammar I used and also on the coherence of all the sections with the subject.

Thanks, Lewismaster (talk) 20:37, 26 January 2014 (UTC)