Wikipedia:Peer review/Shaitan/archive1

Shaitan
This article seems to be subject to much bias and not entirely academic language. Some parts of the article have been expunged for irrelevancy and bias, however the rest of the language is more than I am willing to deal with. Moreover, parts which are relevant to the word shaitan, not to mention scholarly, have been removed by previous editors for no apparently academic reason. Thus restoration and clean up of this article is requiring more than I am capable of providing, so I would like to request that some individuals who are capable go over this article. 68.163.3.152 04:16, 11 August 2005 (UTC)


 * please use cleanup for this kind of issue. I've tried rewriting the introduction a little, and tagging the article appropriately.  Mozzerati 20:53, August 24, 2005 (UTC)