Wikipedia:Peer review/Shapour Bakhtiar/archive1

Shapour Bakhtiar
I spent a lot of time researching this article and I was wondering how I could improve it further. I'm especially interested as to wether the style is good. --Carabinieri 23:45, 31 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Well, the political history leaps from '79 to his assassination. Maybe cover what he did to get elected and assassinated? And please check out my Hopkins School article a little further down! No one seems to want to help! Staxringold 03:38, 1 September 2005 (UTC)