Wikipedia:Peer review/Shawn Graham/archive1

Shawn Graham
This is an article I would like to eventually nominate for featured article status. I have not done this before and am hoping that I can get some viewpoints from other Wikipedians as to its quality and make any necessary improvements before nominating it as a featured article. Thanks very much. - Jord 16:00, 25 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 20:44, 26 October 2006 (UTC)


 * The lead is short, even for an article of this size. Try to mention each section of the article, even if it's just a couple of words, as per WP:WIAFA. There are some references, but some sentences are still lacking, such as "...became one of the most vocal and popular critics of the government of Bernard Lord." Also, convert them to inline citations as suggested by WP:WIAFA. There are a number of redlinks - consider whether they are all worthy of their own articles and if not, delink them. If they are, try to create them (even as a stub), wherever possible. The first image (in the infobox) has a dubious copyright statement - it purports to be low-resolution but allows a high-resolution download. Trebor 23:25, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much for this, I will try to address these issues. - Jord 16:47, 30 October 2006 (UTC)