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Sid Barnes
This article is the result of an extensive co-operation by members of the cricket WikiProject. We're working towards a Featured Topic on The Invincibles, and Barnes was one of the most 'colourful' members of that team.

Listing the article for Peer Review with a view to gaining useful feedback before going to WP:FAC.

We're particularly interested to hear from people who know little or nothing about cricket. We appreciate that it's hard to comment on such an article - it's even harder to write it so that it meets the requirements of neither dumbing down, nor being completely obscure. Hopefully, we've pitched it about right (see, I can do baseball metaphors too) and you're not completely stumped. (Sorry, that's a cricket one). Particularly keen for you to find examples of unexplained or unwikilinked cricket jargon.

Also, please do check for the usual transgressions of MOS, citations missing or malformed, inconsistencies, typos etc.

Thanks so much. I think you'll find his story is interesting enough to reward you for the effort of reading the bio.

Cheers --Dweller (talk) 16:07, 18 December 2007 (UTC)


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 01:19, 19 December 2007 (UTC)