Wikipedia:Peer review/Singlish/archive1

Singlish
Opening a peer review by request of Pabix, who hopes to bring this to FAC again after the peer reviews. Rlevse 18:20, 21 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks for having done it, Rlevse!&#160; ♦ &#160;Pabix&#160;ℹ
 * See Featured article candidates/Singlish/archive1 for the FAC that led to this peer review. Armedblowfish (talk|mail|contribs) 19:44, 21 June 2006 (UTC)


 * The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and may or may not be accurate for the article in question (due to possible javascript errors/uniqueness of articles).


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example,  ==The Biography==  would be changed to  ==Biography== .
 * ✅&#160; ♦ &#160;Pabix&#160;ℹ 06:48, 24 June 2006 (UTC)


 * As per WP:MOS, please do not link words in headings.
 * ✅ ter890 ~ter890~ 07:28, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading  ==Magellan's journey== , use  ==Journey== .
 * ✅&#160; ♦ &#160;Pabix&#160;ℹ 06:48, 24 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
 * ✅ trivia section removed Ter890 (talk) ~ter890~ 16:25, 17 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.


 * Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) maybe too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per WP:SS.


 * article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, than an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.


 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.


 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 2a.
 * You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions (and the javascript checklist; see the last paragraph in the lead) for further ideas.
 * Thanks, Andy t 20:09, 21 June 2006 (UTC)