Wikipedia:Peer review/Sleeping Dogs (video game)/archive2

Sleeping Dogs (video game)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get some feedback about issues that need to be resolved. After that, I would like to nominate it for a featured article.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks for you cooperation! URDNEXT (talk) 18:15, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Why information of small DLC packs and release information of the bigger ones were removed? Replacing it with pure plot summary isn't an improvement. --Mika1h (talk) 19:14, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
 * It wasn't on purpose. I accidentaly deleted them while taking the plot summaries from the synopsis section. Can you revert it? URDNEXT (talk) 20:32, 7 June 2014 (UTC)

Comments by Cas Liber
Random notes...


 * Avoid standalone setences - try to incorporate them into paragraphs.
 * Make sure everything has a citation.
 * Done, what now? URDNEXT (talk) 23:01, 7 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Let facts speak for themselves - see - not sure if there are other examples of this
 * Ok, now I get it. I'll try to fix some of the issues. URDNEXT (talk) 23:47, 7 June 2014 (UTC)

Comments by David Fuchs
Forthcoming... Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 17:08, 24 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks, man! I appreciate it! URDNEXT (talk) 17:16, 24 June 2014 (UTC)