Wikipedia:Peer review/Slobodan Milošević/archive1

Slobodan Milošević
This is a actual topic and the article is of high quality and long. Any proposals on improvement to get FA status? Off! 20:48, 25 March 2006 (UTC)

Thanks, AndyZ t 23:17, 25 March 2006 (UTC)
 * I suggest that early career be renamed early life because not all of it is on career.
 * Under "Downfall of presidency", there are 4 one-sentence run-on paragraphs that need to be fixed.
 * There are several external links towards the end that need to be converted to footnotes.


 * More pictures would be nice, and more inline citations (50 is more like the expected standard today, not 5).--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 04:46, 27 March 2006 (UTC)