Wikipedia:Peer review/Slovenian language/archive1

Slovenian language
I have just read the article Russian language that is a FA. I was thinking of improving this article to a similar quality, I am open for suggestions what to do. Thank you in advance. --Ton e  11:57, 10 October 2006 (UTC)
 * The article is uncited; the first thing it needs is inline citations. Be careful of comparisons to other FA articles, as they may no longer be currently at FA standard. Good luck, Sandy 14:59, 10 October 2006 (UTC)
 * The Russian language article was made FA in 2004! After a brief look I think it would fail on inline citations if nominated in 2006.  With your Slovenian one you should cite more diligently if you want it to be FA.  (Some random suggestions follow.)
 * It seems that there are a lot of sections that are stubs that reference other articles, you should expand those.
 * The map of distribution is not perfectly clear - the scale is too large and it is colour coded in 3 shades of green but with no explanation. Perhaps you should make the map smaller scale and explain the colour coding.
 * The last paragraph says: "Examples of the language in use are given at every topic in the Slovenian grammar article" - you should avoid referring to other articles so directly, instead give some examples and maybe do a seealso.--Konst.able 06:21, 11 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Ruhrfisch 02:44, 19 October 2006 (UTC)